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The map shows how the coffee beans are prepared

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The map explains the way the in which coffee beans created. Overall, The process consists of ten stages beginning with collection of beans from the plants and ending up with packing of coffee powder. First of all, in the first stage they will collect coffee beans from the coffee plants. After that, the coffee beans will be dried under the sun. Next, the dried beans will be transferred to a roaster to undergo roasting purpose. In the next stage, the roasted beans will be cooled down rapidly. Following this, beans will put in to a grinder machine to acquire the mixture of coffee. After that, the mixture will then mix with hot water. After that, the mixture will transfer to a container where they undergo strain process. Subsequently, they will freeze the mixture by using the cooling machine. After that, the cooled mixture will put in a grinder and dry it in a vacuum. Lastly, the coffee will be transferred to each jar and are ready to use.
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Overall
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beans
from the plants and ending up with packing of
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coffee
powder.

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from the
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plants. After that, the
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beans
will
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under the sun.
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a roaster to undergo roasting purpose. In the
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stage, the roasted
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will
be cooled
down
rapidly
. Following this,
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beans
will put in to a grinder machine to acquire the
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mixture
of
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coffee
. After that, the
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mixture
will then mix with hot water. After that, the
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mixture
will transfer to a container where they undergo strain process.
Subsequently
, they will freeze the
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mixture
by using the cooling machine. After that, the cooled
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mixture
will put in a grinder and dry it in a vacuum.
Lastly
, the
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will
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to each jar and are ready to
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IELTS academic The map shows how the coffee beans are prepared

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4 paragraphs
168 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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