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fast food vs. sit-down restaurants

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The line graph illustrates the amount of meals which eat people junk food or sit-down restaurant during a period from 1970 to 2000 Overall a clear link can be drawn the average family has dramatically increased the number of meals that they eat at restaurant As the graphs shows the percentage of family’s food budget started at 20 in 1970 followed by tiny increase to around to 30 by 1980. the percentage more than doubled in 1990 to 35 percent and rose again in 2000 to 50 percentage Where families eat their restaurant meals also changed during a period of 30 years In 1970 families eat the same number of meals at fast food and sit down restaurant, in 1980 families ate slightly more frequently at sit down restaurant however since 1990 fast food restaurants serve more meals to families than do the sit down restaurants. Most of the restaurants meals from 2000 were eaten at the fast food restaurants
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during a period from 1970 to 2000

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and sit down
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, in 1980
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families
ate
slightly
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since 1990
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serve more
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IELTS academic fast food vs. sit-down restaurants

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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