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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the total number of university graduates, including male and female students in Canada considered from 1992 to 2007. The graph given graph shows how many thousands of male and female students graduated and summarised over the year span of 1992 to 2007. It has been evident from the graph that the female students are more likely graduated every year then male cohorts. First, in year 1992, almost 100, 000 female pupils have been graded in Canadian university. The data identifies that the increase in female sophomore are increasing exponentially each year, which has the highest peak in year 2007, touching the apporoximately 1. 5 billion mark. Second, the male disciples are less likey to get graduation then females, started the lowest mark of 70000 in year 1992. The graph has linearally increased and has the highest point nearly 100, 000 in year 2007, which is almost 50000 less than female graduates in that year.
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illustrates the total number of university graduates, including male and
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students in Canada considered from 1992 to 2007.

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thousands of male and
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students graduated and
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over the
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span of 1992 to 2007. It has been evident from the
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that the
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students are more likely graduated every
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male cohorts.

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1992, almost 100, 000
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pupils have
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in Canadian university. The data identifies that the increase in
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sophomore are increasing
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, which has the highest peak in
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2007, touching the
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apporoximately
1. 5 billion mark.

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,
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the lowest mark of 70000 in
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1992. The
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increased and has the highest point
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100, 000 in
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2007, which is almost 50000 less than
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graduates in that
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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