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Average daily sales , by number of servings

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The bar graph demonstrates how many servings of certain food items are sold on average everyday in two different seasons at the vista café. The average number of sales of each item changed with season. Certain food items had much higher sales than others in the winter. Hot coffee had the highest number of sales, with an average of 75 servings sold daily. following this, the item with the second highest number of sales is soup, with an average of 50 servings sold daily. Salad and ice cream had average daily sales of 25 servings each, and iced coffee had the lowest number of sales with close to zero servings sold daily. The sales number of each food item were different in summer compared to winter. Iced coffee sales rose significantly to an average of 40 servings sold daily. The item that had the second highest number of sales were ice cream, with an average of 35 servings sold daily. Hot coffee sales fell to just 30 servings daily. Soup and salad had the lowest number of sales, with 25 servings sold daily on average. In general, the average daily sales of each food item changed when the season changed. Certain items were more popular in winter, but certain were more popular in summer.
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