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The chart below shows the total number of books sold at three bookshops in Bayside City last year

The chart below shows the total number of books sold at three bookshops in Bayside City last year VEPmD
The given line chart gives information about the quantity of books which are sold by three bookstores of Bayside metropolitan is last year. Overall, there are upward fluctuations in three kinds of books which are Barnes and Noble, Cozy Corner, and Frugal Muse. As can be seen, the amount of Barnes and Noble books sold witnessed a brisk climb from under 25, 000 books to about 30, 000 books between January and June before reaching a peak of 42, 000 in August. Then, from August to December, the number of Barnes and Noble books noticeably descended to nearly 27, 000 books. On the other hand, the total books which are sold of Cozy Corner and Frugal Muse both noted the vibration from January to July before the sum of Cozy Corner books sold extensively sank to 22, 000 in August, after the dropping, the Cozy Corner books sold remained stable about 23, 000 from August to December. The total number of Frugal Muse books sold mildly ascended to 11, 000 at the end of the year.
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Cozy
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, and Frugal Muse.

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, the amount of Barnes and Noble
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sold witnessed a brisk climb from under 25, 000
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to about 30, 000
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between January and June
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reaching a peak of 42, 000 in August. Then, from August to December, the number of Barnes and Noble
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noticeably
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Cozy
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and Frugal Muse both noted the vibration from January to July
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Cozy
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Corner
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sold
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sank to 22, 000 in August, after the dropping, the
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Cozy
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Corner
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sold remained stable about 23, 000 from August to December. The total number of Frugal Muse
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mildly
ascended to 11, 000 at the
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