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The main reasons people gave for moving away from capital city to the countryside.

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Nowadays, migration is a common phenomenon. Some people tend to live in calm place and somewhere has less pollution. In my opinion they try to migrate to countryside. There are three main reasons why I feel this way. Rising cost of living: Firstly, with concentrate in graph you can see an inflation grown between 1990 to 2000 years. In these years the cost of living has grown. As you know, the important factor is cost of living for people. Traffic: For the second reasons of migration people to rural we can point to heavy traffic in capital cities. In these cities, most of peoples want to drive their own car to go to their works. From this point of view, we can see heavy traffic through the day and night in between years 1990 to 2010. Lifestyle: Another pertinent point is lifestyle. Over time, competition between people had grown. If a person buys a car, his neighbor tries to purchase two better cars. Ones for his wife and another for himself. Therefore, with these main reasons and other reasons that there is no time to say we can see migration to countryside was growing between years 1990 to 2010.
Nowadays, migration is a common phenomenon.
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Traffic: For the second
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of migration
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to rural we can point to heavy traffic in capital cities. In these cities, most of
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peoples
want to drive their
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own
car to go to their works. From this point of view, we can
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see
heavy traffic through the day and night in between years 1990 to 2010.

Lifestyle: Another pertinent point is lifestyle. Over time, competition between
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people
had grown. If a person
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buys
a car, his neighbor tries to
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purchase
two better cars. Ones for his wife and another for himself.

Therefore
, with these main
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reasons
and other
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that there is no time to say we can
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migration to countryside was growing between years 1990 to 2010.
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IELTS academic The main reasons people gave for moving away from capital city to the countryside.

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