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The two maps show changes to the campus of Sunnyhills university between 1995 and today. We can see that the university made many changes during this period, including new buildings and recreation facilities.

The two maps show changes to the campus of Sunnyhills university between 1995 and today. We can see that the university made many changes during this period, including new buildings and recreation facilities. Pkjaj
One of the Sunnyhills university campus first looked like in 1995. At that time, there was a parking lot a bus stop, trees, the Watson building, the main recreation area in the Northwest. On the northeast side was the Forest, a second parking lot, a cafe. In the Southwest of the picture were halls of residence, trees, Scott library. In the southeast there was a gym, tennis courts, football pitch. In the middle of the Student Union the Founder's Building. There have been many changes to the Sunnyhills university map today. On the Northwest side,
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, trees, the Watson building, the main recreation area in the Northwest. On the northeast side was the Forest, a second parking lot, a
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. In the Southwest of the picture were halls of residence, trees, Scott library. In the southeast there was a gym, tennis courts, football pitch.
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IELTS academic The two maps show changes to the campus of Sunnyhills university between 1995 and today. We can see that the university made many changes during this period, including new buildings and recreation facilities.

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