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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. n6don
The given maps illustrate the road access around city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Overall, it is observed that there is a significant change around the city hospital. This includes two roundabouts, couple of car parkings and a new Bus station. In the year 2007, Ring road around the city hospital is connected to hospital road in the south. On the west of hospital road there are multiple Bus stations and in the east there is a car parking facility for both staff and public. Furthermore, the hospital road is connected to a city road. On the other hand in 2010, there is a major improvement in the infrastructure. Firstly, the old car park is reserved only for the employees and on the eastern side a new parking facility is provided for patients and public. Secondly, the Bus stations are combined and formed a Bus terminal. Additonally, there are two traffic signals on both ends of the hospital road in order to control the flow of traffic.
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maps illustrate the
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access around city
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hospital
in 2007 and 2010.

Overall
, it
is observed
that there is a significant
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change
around the city
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hospital
. This includes two roundabouts,
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couple of
car
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parkings
and a new Bus station.

In the year 2007, Ring
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road
around the city
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hospital
is connected
to
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hospital
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road
in the south. On the west of
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hospital
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road
there are multiple Bus stations and in the east there is a car parking facility for both staff and public.
Furthermore
, the
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hospital
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road
is connected
to a city road.

On the other hand
in 2010, there is a major improvement in the infrastructure.
Firstly
, the
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old
car park
is reserved
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only
for the employees and on the eastern side a new parking facility
is provided
for patients and public.
Secondly
, the Bus stations
are combined
and formed a Bus terminal.
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Additonally
, there are two traffic signals on both ends of the
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hospital
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road
in order to control the flow of traffic.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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