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The two maps below provides the road way in to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below provides the road way in to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. MBya6
The two maps below provides the road way in to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. overall, there are many changes around the hospital with in three years. The bus stops, car park and the hospital road is in 2007 are remodeled. Starting from the south, There is roundabout to the south connecting the cityroad, hospital road, bus station and other two pathways one is going to the further south of roundabout and other is to the west of roundabout. There is bus station to the west of hospital road which is connecting the two roundabouts in the north(near the hospital) and south, the staff car parking to the east of hospital road. The bus station which is south-west corner to the city hospital is connecting the two roundabouts. The city hospital which is surrounded by the ring road joins the west and east sides of roundabout near the city hospital. And there is a pubic car park to the east of city hospital connected from ring road comming from the east.
The two maps below provides the
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way in to a city
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in 2007 and in 2010.

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overall
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around the
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with in three years. The bus
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, car park and the
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is in 2007
are remodeled
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Starting from the south, There is roundabout to the south connecting the
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cityroad
,
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hospital
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, bus station and other two pathways one is going to the
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is to the west of roundabout. There is bus station to the west of
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hospital
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which is connecting the two
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roundabouts
in the north(near the
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hospital)
and south, the staff car parking to the east of
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hospital
road.

The bus station which is south-west corner to the city
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is connecting the two
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roundabouts
. The city
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hospital
which
is surrounded
by the ring
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road
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joins
the west and east sides of roundabout near the city hospital.

And there is a
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car park to the east of city
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hospital
connected from ring
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comming
from the east.
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IELTS academic The two maps below provides the road way in to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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