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The two charts illustrate the segments of 5 types of enrgy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The two charts illustrate the segments of 5 types of enrgy production in France in 1995 and 2005. M37w6
Overall, In both years, the most important energy sources were gas and coal which accounted for a quarter of France's energy production every in two years. In France, energy production showed the highest results in coal. This was observed in 1995 and even 2005 the highest result was for coal. In the first year coal mining energy was 29, 80% it had a slight increase to a round 1% in 2005 to 30, 9%. Gas production copocity increased by 1, 68% to 30, 31% after 10 years. The remaning methods of production copocity nuclear energy and other energy sources as well as energy increased by 5% respectively 10, 10% and9, 10%. Petro power energy production fell from 29, 27% in 1995 to 19, 55% in 2005.
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IELTS academic The two charts illustrate the segments of 5 types of enrgy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

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