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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Om2j
The given tables illustrate details about temperature, sunrise and sunset in two different cities(London, Sydney). This data was taken on a weekend of December 2018. Overall, the temperature of London on those days was much less, sunrise encountered late while the sunset happened a bit early so we can conclude that there was winter in the city. Meanwhile, Sydney reported highest temperature with an early rise of the sun as well as with a delay in setting. So, this came under summer. London disclosed a weather with 13 degrees Celcius as highest. The average dawn was at 8. 06 am, whereas the night fall is at 15. 58 pm. There are only mere changes every day but Saturday reported highest temperature. Sydney filed a maximum atmospheric pressure with 28 degrees while the average dawn time was 5. 45 am. In contrast to London, Sydney's sundown is at 20. 07 pm. Sydney was mostly humid on that weekend but 30th December which was Sunday was the hottest.
The
given
tables illustrate
details
about temperature, sunrise and sunset in two
different
cities(London, Sydney). This data
was taken
on a weekend of December 2018.

Overall
, the temperature of London on those days was much less, sunrise encountered late while the sunset happened a bit early
so
we can conclude that there was winter in the city. Meanwhile, Sydney reported highest temperature with an early rise of the sun
as well
as with a delay in setting.
So
, this came under summer.

London disclosed a weather with 13 degrees
Celcius
as highest. The average dawn was at 8. 06 am, whereas the night fall is at 15. 58 pm. There are
only
mere
changes
every day
but
Saturday reported highest temperature.

Sydney filed a maximum atmospheric pressure with 28 degrees while the average dawn time was 5. 45 am.
In contrast
to London, Sydney's sundown is at 20. 07 pm. Sydney was
mostly
humid on that weekend
but
30th December which was Sunday was the hottest.
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IELTS academic The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

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