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The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now.

The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now. 7ndk
The illustrations indicate conversions of the facilities in a theatre between 1980 and now. Overall, the number of installations has increased dramatically since 1980. In details, the locations of entrance, ticket booth and toilet have been constant. One of the alterations is that only two cinemas which located in both sides respectively in the interior of theatre in 1980, and now the number of cinemas rises by another 3 that are one in left side and others in right side. The position of a beverage store which was in the left corner in 1980 is replaced by a DVD shop while the drinks store is shifted to the corner in opposite side and has started to sell food. Beside the area of diet is a relax room which was not existence in 1980. In addition, the car park which was in the behind of theatre was demolished to make the theatre has enough space to construct new cinemas.
The illustrations indicate conversions of the facilities in a
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theatre
between 1980 and
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now
.

Overall
, the number of installations has increased
dramatically
since 1980.

In
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details
, the locations of entrance, ticket booth and toilet have been constant. One of the alterations is that
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only
two cinemas which located in both
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sides
respectively
in the interior of
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theatre
in 1980, and
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now
the number of cinemas rises by another 3 that are one in
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left
side
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and others
in right side. The position of a beverage store which was in the
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left
corner in 1980
is replaced
by a DVD shop while the drinks store
is shifted
to the corner in opposite side and has
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started
to sell food. Beside the area of diet is
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a relax
room which was not existence in 1980.
In addition
, the car park which was in the behind of
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theatre
was demolished
to
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make
the
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theatre
has
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enough
space to construct new cinemas.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show changes of a cinema from 1980 until now.

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