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The tables below gives information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables compare how the figure of Fairtrade-labelled coffees and bananas sales changed in 1999 and 2004, in five distinct European countries. Overall, the purchase of these products had a substantial rise in five-year interval for all countries except for Denmark. The coffee expenditures for UK enormously increased from 1. 5 to 20 million euros, and the banana expenses jumped into fivefold for Fairtrade-labelled products. The second huge increase was in Switzerland, the coffee sales doubled in 2004, and the banana’s exceeded threefold of 1999 ones. The coffee sales in Belgium reached 1. 7 by 0. 7 million euros rise, while the banana sales grew more than six times to 4 million. In two of the 5 countries, there was not important difference for fairtrade-labelled products. In Denmark, the coffee sales incremented only 0. 2 million euros, but the banana sales dropped approximately half of their 1999 expenditures in 2004 with 0. 9 million euros. Similarly, Sweden showed almost the same similarity in the sale figures of them.
The tables compare how the figure of
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Fairtrade-labelled
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coffees
and bananas
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sales
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changed
in 1999 and 2004, in five distinct European countries.
Overall
, the
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purchase
of these products had a substantial rise in five-year interval for all countries
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except for
Denmark.

The
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coffee
expenditures for UK
enormously
increased from 1. 5 to 20
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million
euros, and the banana expenses jumped into fivefold for
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Fairtrade-labelled
products. The second huge increase was in Switzerland, the
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coffee
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sales
doubled in 2004, and the banana’s exceeded threefold of 1999 ones. The
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coffee
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sales
in Belgium reached 1. 7 by 0. 7
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million
euros rise, while the banana
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sales
grew more than six times to 4 million.

In two of the 5 countries, there was not
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important
difference for
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fairtrade-labelled
products. In Denmark, the
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coffee
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sales
incremented
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only
0. 2
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million
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the banana
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sales
dropped approximately half of their 1999 expenditures in 2004 with 0. 9
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million
euros.
Similarly
, Sweden
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showed
almost the same similarity in the
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sale
figures of them.
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IELTS academic The tables below gives information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

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