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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tables demonstrate the labelled coffee and bananas’fairtrade sales number in five different countries in 1999 and 2004. Units are measured with millions of euros. Overall, almost all countries’s sales increased from 1999 to 2004 both cofee and bananas While the most considerable rise observed on coffee which jumped from 1. 5 to 20 millions of euros in UK, Switzerland’s banana trade reached almost just over three times from 1999 to 2004 with 15 and 47. In terms of coffee, although Switzerland started as a lider on trade with 3 in 1999, In 2004 UK sales show increase more than three times it and come in 20 milion euros. Denmark and Sweden displayed same amount of rise by 0. 2 over the five years. When looking at bananas sales, Denmark and Sweeden had decrease between 1999 and 2004 on the contrary other three countries. Switzerland number’s showed significant difference compeared with other countries both in two years with 15 and 47 respectively.

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