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The table shows the proportion of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009

The table shows the proportion of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 JPQk

The represented diagram exhibits data about the percentage of students who attend a diverse range of secondary schools during the period from 2000 to 2009. Generally, three schools experienced a decrease of different levels in the pupils index, whereas the trend of Community Schools increased substantially. Turning to Specialist Schools first, the proportion of pupils studying here was falling moderately reaching 10 % in 2009. In comparison, the rate of individuals in educational establishments was declining markedly and was twice less in the end of the period than in 2000. Additionally, Voluntary-controlled Schools were the most participated institutions in 2000 with more than half of pupils' studying there. However, in the following years they witnessed a dramatic fall in the index of students being one fifth in 2009. In contrast to previous schools, the rate of participants in Community Schools reached approximately threefold growth in 2005 and plummeted by 2009, comprising 58%.

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 threefold growth in 2005 and plummeted by 2009, comprising 58%. 