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The chart below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries.

The chart below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries. Kg5M
The pie charts give information about how the world’s water is distributed, whereas the bar chart illustrates the percentage of water used in agriculture, domestic use and industry in three countries (Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada). Overall, salt water makes up an overwhelming majority of the world’s water. Fresh water is made up of mainly water from ice and glaciers. While most water in Egypt and Saudi Arabia is used for agriculture, in Canada it is predominantly used for industry. The pie charts show that 97% of global water is salt water compared to a mere 3% which is fresh water. Water from ice and glaciers accounts for 79% of all fresh water as opposed to ground water and surface water (20% and 1% respectively). In terms of the use of water, both Egypt and Saudi Arabia use almost 80% of their water for agriculture in comparison to domestic usage and industry which account for approximately 15% and 10% respectively. The reverse is seen in Canada where only 10% of water is used for agriculture and domestic purposes in contrast to industry, which uses 80% of water in Canada.
The pie charts give information about how the world’s
water
is distributed
, whereas the bar chart illustrates the percentage of
water
used
in
agriculture
, domestic
use
and industry in three countries (Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada).

Overall
, salt
water
makes
up an overwhelming majority of the world’s
water
. Fresh
water
is made
up of
mainly
water
from ice and glaciers. While most
water
in Egypt and Saudi Arabia is
used
for
agriculture
, in Canada it is
predominantly
used
for industry.

The pie charts
show
that 97% of global
water
is salt
water
compared to a mere 3% which is fresh
water
.
Water
from ice and glaciers accounts for 79% of all fresh
water
as opposed to ground
water
and surface
water
(20% and 1%
respectively
).

In terms of the
use
of
water
, both Egypt and Saudi Arabia
use
almost 80% of their
water
for
agriculture
in comparison
to domestic usage and industry which account for approximately 15% and 10%
respectively
. The reverse is
seen
in Canada where
only
10% of
water
is
used
for
agriculture
and domestic purposes
in contrast
to industry, which
uses
80% of
water
in Canada.
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IELTS academic The chart below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries.

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