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The chart below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries.

The chart below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries. Kg5M
The pie charts give information about how the world’s water is distributed, whereas the bar chart illustrates the percentage of water used in agriculture, domestic use and industry in three countries (Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada). Overall, salt water makes up an overwhelming majority of the world’s water. Fresh water is made up of mainly water from ice and glaciers. While most water in Egypt and Saudi Arabia is used for agriculture, in Canada it is predominantly used for industry. The pie charts show that 97% of global water is salt water compared to a mere 3% which is fresh water. Water from ice and glaciers accounts for 79% of all fresh water as opposed to ground water and surface water (20% and 1% respectively). In terms of the use of water, both Egypt and Saudi Arabia use almost 80% of their water for agriculture in comparison to domestic usage and industry which account for approximately 15% and 10% respectively. The reverse is seen in Canada where only 10% of water is used for agriculture and domestic purposes in contrast to industry, which uses 80% of water in Canada.
The pie charts give information about how the world’s
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is distributed
, whereas the bar chart illustrates the percentage of
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water
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used
in
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agriculture
, domestic
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use
and industry in three countries (Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada).

Overall
, salt
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water
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makes
up an overwhelming majority of the world’s
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. Fresh
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is made
up of
mainly
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water
from ice and glaciers. While most
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water
in Egypt and Saudi Arabia is
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used
for
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agriculture
, in Canada it is
predominantly
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used
for industry.

The pie charts
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show
that 97% of global
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water
is salt
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water
compared to a mere 3% which is fresh
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water
.
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Water
from ice and glaciers accounts for 79% of all fresh
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water
as opposed to ground
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water
and surface
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water
(20% and 1%
respectively
).

In terms of the
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use
of
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water
, both Egypt and Saudi Arabia
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use
almost 80% of their
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water
for
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agriculture
in comparison
to domestic usage and industry which account for approximately 15% and 10%
respectively
. The reverse is
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seen
in Canada where
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only
10% of
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water
is
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used
for
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agriculture
and domestic purposes
in contrast
to industry, which
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uses
80% of
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in Canada.

IELTS academic The chart below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries.

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