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The graph presents statistics of amount of discounts in the 2009 year.

The graph presents statistics of amount of discounts in the 2009 year. RYnQ

The graph presents statistics of amount of discounts in the 2009 year. Mainly, the costs of purchases rose, however figure B shows the opposite. The commodity A is the most changed over the given period. Its price soared from approximately zero to about six thousand dollars. Another figure that shows large increase is product C. The expence had been equal to ten thousands dollars, afterwards that number was grown by more than fifty thousands. Unlike, the product B demonstrates a marked fall. Despite the fact that price of a good was the highest in January, this number was gradually decreased in twelve months period. Moreover, cost of the item reached almost the lowest level in December. Nevertheless, the least number at the end of 2009 was achieved by product D. Its price flactuated, but in the October the number finally leveled off. If the rest of the goods showed significant changes, this figure was modified clearly less than others did.

The graph presents statistics of amount of discounts in the 2009 year. Mainly
, the costs of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
purchases
 rose, however
 figure B This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the opposite. The commodity A is the most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 over the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period. Its price soared from approximately zero to about six thousand dollars. Another figure that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 large increase is product C. The Possible spelling mistake found.expenseex pence
expence
 had been equal to ten thousands dollars, afterwards that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
was grown
 by more than fifty thousands. Unlike, the product B demonstrates a marked fall. Despite the fact that price of a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 was the highest in January, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 was gradually
 decreased in twelve months period. Moreover
, cost of the item reached almost the lowest level in December. Nevertheless
, the least You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2009 was achieved
 by product D. Its price Possible spelling mistake found.fluctuatedfl actuated
flactuated
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the October the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
finally
 leveled off. If the rest of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, this figure was modified
clearly
 less than others did. 