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The table shows the leausre hours of didfgerent age froups between 20 and 70 in present time

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The given table elucidates the data of leisure time which different age groups have per year in someland in hours. Overall, what stands out from the table is that devoting leisure hours in watching TV and videos is the most famous activity among teenagers and mature people, while going to cinema is the least preferable activity for all age groups in their leisure period. To commence with, teens spend 1200 hours in watching TV and videos per year. However, age group between 20s and 60s devote 200 hours in front of television and older than that spene 1100 hours. Moreover, being social with 4 or more people and going to cinema are the least preferable activity in leisure time among all age groups in which they spend merely 100 hours. Additionally, socializing with 4 or less people is quite common among all age groups and for that they spend hours ranges from 150 to 300. In addition, exercising alone is the most preferable leisure activity for 30s and 40s individuals and they spend 200 hours, while other age groups devote less than 150 hours for it. Group exercise and sport is popular among teens and people of age 40, where teens devote 450 hours and 40s people spend hours between 150 and 350. People above 50 years do not prefer to do group exercise and sporting in their leisure time.
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between 20s and 60s devote 200
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ranges from 150 to 300.

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40, where teens devote 450
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between 150 and 350.
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IELTS academic The table shows the leausre hours of didfgerent age froups between 20 and 70 in present time

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