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The table shows oil production in Turkey, Mexico , Poland , Moldova and Togo from 2003 to 2007.

The table shows oil production in Turkey, Mexico, Poland, Moldova and Togo from 2003 to 2007. ewGox
The given table illustrates the proportion of oil production in 5 countries between 2003 and 2007. A quick glance at the graph is enough to make it clear that, although the amount of oil production in Turkey, Mexico and Moldova increased, this amount in Poland dropped over the period. However in Togo it fluctuated. To begin with 2003, the highest proportion of oil production was in Poland. On the contrary, it decreased during the period from 285 in 2003 to 226 in 2007. And Mexico and Moldova showed a number of fluctuating trends. They started with 147 and 103 respectively and hovered 183 and 114 at the finish of the dedicated timeframe. On the other hand, the least production of oil was in Togo (18) in 2003 before growing to 23 in 2005. Interestingly, it dived back to its initial amount (18). At the same time this number in Turkey improved dramatically from 47 in 2003 to 106 ending period.
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in 5 countries between 2003 and 2007. A quick glance at the graph is
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in Turkey, Mexico and Moldova increased, this amount in Poland dropped over the period.
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was in Poland.
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with 147 and 103
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and hovered 183 and 114 at the finish of the dedicated timeframe.
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was in Togo (18) in 2003
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growing to 23 in 2005.
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