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The map describes the changes in the village of ryemouth in 1995 and present day.

The map describes the changes in the village of ryemouth in 1995 and present day. 2xnWj
The map illustrates the changes that have been occurred in the village of Ryemouth over a 25 years’ time period, beginning in 1995 and ending in present. To start with by looking at southern part of village, firstly there are no fishing port and fish market longer available in the town. In the place of fish market, new residential apartments built alongside the road passing from the west to the east. Five shops which were located opposite side of the market turned into the restaurants. Moreover, new car park has constructed to the right of a hotel. There have also been some changes in the sport sector in a map, easter part of the village had the forest park in 1995, which have demolished in the present, however, they successfully turned farmland into the golf ground which is beyond the tennis court. A new path has created in the westen side of the town, which passes by the housing. In addition, two more new houses are made to the left of four houses.
The map illustrates the
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Ryemouth
over a 25 years’ time period, beginning in 1995 and ending in present.

To
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start
with by looking at southern part of village,
firstly
there are no fishing port and fish market longer available in the town. In the place of fish market,
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new
residential apartments built alongside the road passing from the west to the east. Five shops which
were located
opposite side of the market turned into the restaurants.
Moreover
,
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new
car park has constructed to the right of a hotel.

There have
also
been
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some
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changes
in the sport sector in a map, easter part of the village had the forest park in 1995, which have demolished in the present,
however
, they
successfully
turned farmland into the golf ground which is beyond the tennis court. A
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new
path has created in the
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westen
side of the town, which passes by the housing.
In addition
, two more
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houses
are made
to the
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left
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houses
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