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The given pie chart and line graph illustrate about sales in 2000 and share price for coca cola in 1996 to2001.

The given pie chart and line graph illustrate about sales in 2000 and share price for coca cola in 1996 to2001. EqnGr
Having a myopic look at the pie chart, the maximum percentage of sales at North America in 2000 which were noticed as 30. 4% whereas the minimum ratio of sales at Africa and Middle East in 2000 which were recorded as 7. 0%. The percentile of sales at Asia and Latin America in 2000 which were observed as 16. 4% and 25. 7% respectively. Turning to the rest of details, a resemblance of 70$ can be seen in 1998 and 1999 those were share price for coca cola. Surprisingly, 2 folds more share price for coca cola in 1998 as compare to 1996 which was only 35$. The difference of 5$ can be seen in 2000 and 2001 those were share price for coca cola. Overall, it is clear that North America were the biggest sales in 2000 and the line graph show declining trend share price for coca cola
Having a myopic look at the pie chart, the maximum percentage of
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sales
at North America in 2000 which
were noticed
as 30. 4% whereas the minimum ratio of
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sales
at Africa and Middle East in 2000 which
were recorded
as 7. 0%. The percentile of
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sales
at Asia and Latin America in 2000 which
were observed
as 16. 4% and 25. 7%
respectively
. Turning to the rest of
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details
, a resemblance of
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$70".
70$
can be
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seen
in 1998 and 1999 those
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were
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share
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price
for coca
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cola
.
Surprisingly
, 2 folds more
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share
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price
for coca
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cola
in 1998 as compare to 1996 which was
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only
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$35".
35$
. The difference of
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5$
can be
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seen
in 2000 and 2001 those
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were
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share
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price
for coca
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cola
.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that North America were the biggest
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sales
in 2000 and the line graph
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show
declining trend
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share
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price
for coca
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cola

IELTS academic The given pie chart and line graph illustrate about sales in 2000 and share price for coca cola in 1996 to2001.

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