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The table shows information about top ten countries with largest population in 2019 and projected change in it by 2100

The table shows information about top ten countries with largest population in 2019 and projected change in it by 2100 W8LMq
The given table shows information about the top ten nations which were highly populated in 2019 and also gives some prediction related to changes in these trends by 2100. All in all, the top two positions are occupying by two nations, the China and India during given time periods, whereas Russia and Mexico were on the lowest position with least number of civilians were living there in 2019. In 2019, the China was highly populated country with 1432 million natives, while Mexico was least populated, with only 129 million people. The USA, Indonesia, and Brazil were on third, forth and sixth positions respectively, with 331 million, 276 million, and 213 million of people were choose to live in these countries in 2019. India, which was on the the second position with 1380 million population in 2019, might be become on the peak position in 2100 according to the projected changes, whereas China lifted to one step down behind the India in same year. Importantly, Pakistan is the only nation, which will be on the same number of position as it was in the 2019. lastly, the three new countries will be entering in the list of top ten countries with largest population and these three nations are D. R Congo, Ethiopia, and Tanzania.
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in these trends by 2100. All in all, the top two
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are occupying by two
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, the China and India during
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time periods, whereas Russia and Mexico were on the lowest
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position
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number of civilians were living there in 2019. In 2019, the China was
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with 1432
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million
natives, while Mexico was least populated, with
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only
129
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million
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people
. The USA, Indonesia, and Brazil were on third, forth and sixth
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respectively
, with 331
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million
, 276
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, and 213
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in 2019. India, which was on
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second
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with 1380
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population in 2019, might
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in 2100 according to the projected
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, whereas China lifted to one step down behind the India in same year.
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, Pakistan is the
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as it was in the 2019.
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lastly
, the three new
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population and these three
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are D. R Congo, Ethiopia, and Tanzania.
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