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The table shows data about top 5 countries with the highest number of international schools per year in thousands in Western Asia (Middle East).

The table shows data about top 5 countries with the highest number of international schools per year in thousands in Western Asia (Middle East). LndK
The provided table illustrates total number of international schools and students studying in the Asia’s Western states. Overall, it is clearly seen that UAE has the most students and schools, while other countries are far behind it, and especially Kuwait has the least proportion of international schools. Coming back to details, Emirates possess 596 schools and approximately 0. 6 million students studying, taking top 1 position. Remaining countries’ numbers are not so impressive. However, Saudi Arabia is the most capable of competing with UAE, particularly it has 240 educational institutions and a half number of UAE students(288, 300). Top 3 country is Qatar, having relatively moderate measurements, 164 schools and student enrollment of 126, 100 people. The least numbers belong to Kuwait and Turkey. There are over 80 teaching apartments for 108, 500 youngsters, whereas Turkey provides more than 100 schools but for two times smaller number of teenagers.
The provided table illustrates total
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of international
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schools
and
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students
studying in the Asia’s Western states.
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, it is
clearly
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that UAE has the most
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students
and
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, while other countries are far behind it, and
especially
Kuwait has the least proportion of international schools.

Coming back to
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, Emirates possess 596
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schools
and approximately 0. 6 million
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students
studying, taking top 1 position. Remaining countries’
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numbers
are not
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impressive.
However
, Saudi Arabia is the most capable of competing
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with UAE
,
particularly
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number
of UAE
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students(288
, 300).

Top 3 country is Qatar, having
relatively
moderate measurements, 164
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schools
and
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enrollment of 126, 100
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people
. The least
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belong to Kuwait and Turkey. There are over 80 teaching apartments for 108, 500 youngsters, whereas Turkey provides more than 100
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schools
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for two times smaller
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of
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teenagers
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IELTS academic The table shows data about top 5 countries with the highest number of international schools per year in thousands in Western Asia (Middle East).

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