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The table illustrates the secondary and high school teacher‘s salaries in five countries namely Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan, and Korea in 2009.

The table illustrates the secondary and high school teacher‘s salaries in five countries namely Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan, and Korea in 2009. MrJOk
The table illustrates the secondary and high school teacher‘s salaries in five countries namely Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan, and Korea in 2009. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that teachers in Luxembourg earned the highest, while Australians earned the lowest. Humans in Denmark, in addition, gave the maximum salary, which was fastest in 5 nations. In European countries, teachers in Denmark gave starting salaries lower than Luxembourg’s teachers. After 15 years salary and maximum salary, similarly, Luxembourg wage doubled than that in Denmark. The years to reach the maximum in Denmark, however, were faster than that in other countries. Turning to Asian countries, starting salary in Japan was highest in this area at $34000, while the lowest belonged to Australia at $28000. After having experience, the salary and the maximum were the same in 3 nations at over $45000. Japanese and Korean had 34 and 37 years of experience to reach the maximum, whereas Australians spent 9 years to achieve the aim.
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in Luxembourg earned the highest, while Australians earned the lowest. Humans in Denmark,
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, which was fastest in 5 nations.

In European countries,
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in Denmark gave starting
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lower than Luxembourg’s
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. After 15 years
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and maximum
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than that in Denmark. The years to reach the maximum in Denmark,
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Turning to Asian countries, starting
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in Japan was highest in this area at $34000, while the lowest belonged to Australia at $28000. After having experience, the
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and the maximum were the same in 3 nations at over $45000. Japanese and Korean had 34 and 37 years of experience to reach the maximum, whereas Australians spent 9 years to achieve the aim.
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