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The table gives data on underground railway systems in six cities in terms of the route length, passengers traveling annually and the established year of the railway system.

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The table gives data on underground railway systems in six cities in terms of the route length, passengers traveling annually and the established year of the railway system. Overall, the oldest underground railway service provider is in London and also covers the longest rail route, in 1863 and 394km, respectively. It is also noticeable that Los Angeles is the latest railway as it opened in 2001. London railway system was founded in 1863, which makes it the oldest and the longest underground railway system among these six cities. Each year it received more than 700 thousand passengers. By contrast, the underground railway of Los Angeles is the newest, which was opened in 2001, it has the second shortest route and passengers, with 28km and 50 million, respectively. Regarding Kyoto railway service initiated in 1981 with merely 11km and serve only 45 million passengers each year. The railway system served the largest number of passengers was recorded for Tokyo with the length of the route was 155km and started in 1927. In 1990, Paris was established an underground railway station long 199km and over a billion passengers using the system. At almost the end of the 20th century, the underground railway of Washington DC was established, its length 126km and has 144 million passengers on an average.
The table gives data on
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systems
in six cities in terms of the
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length,
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passengers
traveling
annually
and the established year of the
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system.

Overall
, the oldest
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railway
service provider is in London and
also
covers the longest rail
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route
, in 1863 and
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394km
,
respectively
. It is
also
noticeable that Los Angeles is the latest
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railway
as it opened in 2001.

London
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system
was founded
in 1863, which
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makes
it the oldest and the longest
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railway
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system
among these six cities. Each year it received more than 700 thousand
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passengers
. By contrast, the
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railway
of Los Angeles is the newest, which
was opened
in 2001, it has the second shortest
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route
and
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passengers
, with
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28km
and 50 million,
respectively
. Regarding Kyoto
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service initiated in 1981 with
merely
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11km
and serve
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45 million
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passengers
each year.

The
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served the largest number of
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was recorded
for Tokyo with the length of the
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route
was
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155km
and
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started
in 1927. In 1990, Paris
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station long
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199km
and over a billion
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passengers
using the
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system
. At almost the
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end
of the 20th century, the
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railway
of Washington DC
was established
, its length
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126km
and has 144 million
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passengers
on an average.

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