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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

This graph displays the five most widly consumed fast food. This also gives a brief idea of how much quantity of fast food was consumed in past (2005), in present, and in future(2025). this graps clerly shows that hambuger is the first choice of peope living in Melbourne, followed by fried chicken. salad, fried rice, noodels are consumed in small quanty. Accoring to the present and prediction, people living in Melbourne are getting more diverted toward health as amount of salad consumption is seeing a peek as it has risen from 5 in 2005 to 15 in 2021 to 41 in 2025 which is a very big increment, where as the other fast food like hambuger, fried chicken have very normal increase. This also indicates that people living in Melbourne will be shifting their fat food selection to salad where as fried rice and noodels have not scen any major hike.
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IELTS academic The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

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