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The diagrams demonstrate the method and instruments required to make concrete, as well as how cement is utilized to make concrete for building purposes Overall, the process of manufacturing cement begins with 2 basic ingredients, which are then processed through 5 steps previously being packaged in bags. There seem to be 4 components necessary to make concrete The initial step in making cement is to smash two minerals: limestone and clay. One crushed, they are combined products will be treated in a revolving heater, which will create heat. Polishing has been the final step following the combustion process, and then the cement may be packaged and transported The second picture emphasizes the formula for making concrete, which involves combining 10% water, 15% cement, 25% sand, and 50% gravel in a concrete blender, followed by the blind process, which leaves the concrete ready for the building.
The diagrams demonstrate the method and instruments required to
make
concrete,
as well
as how
cement
is utilized
to
make
concrete for building purposes

Overall
, the process of manufacturing
cement
begins
with 2 basic ingredients, which are then processed through 5 steps previously
being packaged
in bags. There seem to be 4 components necessary to
make
concrete

The initial step in making
cement
is to smash two minerals: limestone and clay. One crushed, they
are combined
products will
be treated
in a revolving heater, which will create heat. Polishing has been the final step following the combustion process, and then the
cement
may
be packaged
and transported

The second picture emphasizes the formula for making concrete, which involves combining 10% water, 15%
cement
, 25% sand, and 50% gravel in a concrete blender, followed by the blind process, which
leaves
the concrete ready for the building.
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IELTS academic zcskjadiuewhc; laSLKCjkwencnalkjdWWD

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145 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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