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The diagrams demonstrate the method and instruments required to make concrete, as well as how cement is utilized to make concrete for building purposes Overall, the process of manufacturing cement begins with 2 basic ingredients, which are then processed through 5 steps before being packaged in bags.

The diagrams demonstrate the method and instruments required to make concrete, as well as how cement is utilized to make concrete for building purposes Overall, the process of manufacturing cement begins with 2 basic ingredients, which are then processed through 5 steps before being packaged in bags. There seem to be 4 components necessary to make concrete The initial step in making cement is to smash two minerals: limestone and clay. One crushed, they are combined products will be treated in a revolving heater, which will create heat. Polishing has been the final step following the combustion process, and then the cement may be packaged and transported The second picture emphasizes the formula for making concrete, which involves combining 10% water, 15% cement, 25% sand, and 50% gravel in a concrete blender, followed by the blind process, which leaves the concrete ready for the building

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