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The table chart consumer spending on different terms in 2002

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The table chart depicts the information about percentage of cousmption expenditure on food/drink/tabacco, clothing footwear and leisure education in five countries in 2002It is vivid that, the most significant Turkey had the highest comsumed of food/drinks/tabacco 32. 14% Followed by Ireland with28. 91% and then Spain with 18. 80%. Italy and Sweden almost same (16. 36% and 15. 77%) in 2002. In contrast Italy was spend more money on clothing/footwear 9. 00% and Turkey and Ireland were close behind. Sweden and Spain were 5. 40% and 6. 5% respectively. However, Spin had the lowest only 1. 98% while Italy and Sweden were remain same 3. 22%. Turkey expenditure double money on leisure and education 4. 35%. Overall, it is evident that, the percentage of equitable product had the highest whilst the others items in 2002.
The table chart depicts the information about percentage of
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cousmption
expenditure on food/drink/
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tabacco
, clothing footwear and leisure education in five countries in 2002It is vivid that, the most significant Turkey had the highest
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comsumed
of food/drinks/
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tabacco
32. 14% Followed by Ireland with28. 91% and then Spain with 18. 80%. Italy and Sweden almost same (16. 36% and 15. 77%) in 2002. In
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contrast
Italy was
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spend
more money on clothing/footwear 9. 00% and Turkey and Ireland were close behind. Sweden and Spain were 5. 40% and 6. 5%
respectively
.
However
, Spin had the lowest
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only
1. 98% while Italy and Sweden were
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remain
same 3. 22%. Turkey expenditure double money on leisure and education 4. 35%.
Overall
, it is evident that, the percentage of equitable product had the highest whilst the others items in 2002.
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