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The table below shows why 100,000UK people traveled abroad from 1994 to 1998. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table below shows why 100, 000UK people traveled abroad from 1994 to 1998. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 0AP25
The table illustrates the purpose of visit abroad of 100, 000 UK residents over 5 years(1994-1998). It can be seen from the table that there was a slight decrease in the number of holiday from 15, 246 in 1994 to 14, 898 in 1995. After that, the number increased sharply until 1998, peaking at 20, 700. However, the 5 years witnessed a gradual rise in the number of business from 3, 155 to 3, 957. The number of visits to friends and relatives remained stable from 1994 to 1995. However, there was a dramatic growth in the number over the next four years. The period from 1994 to 1998 experienced a fluctuation in the number of other reasons and it reached its lowest point at 954 in 1995. From 1994 to 1998, holiday had the highest number among the four reasons. From 1994 to 1996, business occupied the second place, but after that, the number of business was slightly lower than that of visits to friends and relatives. Comparatively, other reasons had the smallest number in the four reasons over the five years. In 1998, the number of holiday was about 20 times as much as that of other reasons.
The table illustrates the purpose of visit abroad of 100, 000 UK residents over 5 years(1994-1998).

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of holiday from 15, 246 in 1994 to 14, 898 in 1995. After that, the
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increased
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until 1998, peaking at 20, 700.
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of business from 3, 155 to 3, 957.

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of visits to friends and relatives remained stable from 1994 to 1995.
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four years. The period from 1994 to 1998 experienced a fluctuation in the
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of other
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and it reached its lowest point at 954 in 1995.

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among the four
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after that, the
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had the smallest
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in the four
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over the five years. In 1998, the
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IELTS academic The table below shows why 100, 000UK people traveled abroad from 1994 to 1998. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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