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The Chart Below Shows the information about the favourite subjects of 60 students in school a and dchool b.

The Chart Below Shows the information about the favourite subjects of 60 students in school a and dchool b. D68Yj
The bar chart illustrates the information regarding the most popular subjects of 60 pupilsbetween two schools in A and B. Overall, it is crystall clear from the chart that sport is the highly preffered by school a whereas, school b was preffering the craft. In detail, it is experinced that in school A 36 students liked the sports, asin school B only 5 puplis choose. Moreover, craft is the second popular subject in studynts of school A, while the school B was not liked this. it is only choosen by 25&4 students respectively. apart from it, 5 puplis liked to study in language course, which is double in school B. Furthermore, it is witnessed that science and socal study less popular in both the schools it is choosen by only 9, 2, 10, 6students. it is least preffered subjects as compared to other subjects.
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