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The bar graph and table below shows the total number of food secure and food insecure households, by district and income, in a country.

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The bar graph compares the information about households who have sufficient and insufficient food district wise and table gives information about number of house who has secure household by income in a country. Overall in bar graph there are more households who have enough food to consume by them. The bar graph shows that district A has the highest number of family almost 81% with efficient food while district C has lowest number almost 60% of household with enough food and it is also the district with highest number of household who have not enough food. While district D is at 2nd position which is having more people who have more insecure households. The table illustrate that there highest number of people in the middle class, with 89 houses. while there are only 13 houses in below poverty threshold, which is also the lowest number in the income group. whereas high income and low income group are having 51 and 21 number of houses respectively.
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