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Pie chart main source of energy for USA

Pie chart main source of energy for USA eEeAO

The given two pie charts provide the information about power sources which has been utilised in America for 10 years. Overall, it is explicitly observed in the figures that natural gas was most significant by USA community whereas hydroelectric power was least significant due to less purpose of it. Getting back to the details, there was only 1% difference in 10 years regarding consumption of natural gas. However, in 1980 coal demands were just about 22%, by following long period till 1990 it rose by 5% as industrial sectors required it more for their work production. Further, charts revealed hydroelectric power exploit data that it was stable from 1980 to 1990 because USA have numerous dams to generate electricity. Probing further, it seemed by percentage ratio that oil was the second highest natural resource which had been used around 45% respectively in the earlier time but later that ratio gets dwindled based on utilisation by united states masses. Last but not the least, brought nuclear power in the society was good attempt to produce electric power in 1980 and that nuclear experimental increased their own capacity by 5% more than before to attain superior outcomes in manufacturing.

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power
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Probing further
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but
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power
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good
 attempt to produce electric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
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 to attain superior outcomes in manufacturing. 