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The given chart demonstrates the number of UK adolescents sticking to a vegetarian diet over the past 140 years.

The given chart demonstrates the number of UK adolescents sticking to a vegetarian diet over the past 140 years. AYOl
The given chart demonstrates the number of UK adolescents sticking to a vegetarian diet over the past 140 years. At the beginning of the first decade, the graph showed a moderate growth reaching a total number of approximately 250000 individuals following the diet, however, it experienced a slight decrease from 1985 to 1987. Between 1987 and 1995, the statistics fluctuated, but it was followed by an impressive rose in the upcoming years, peaked in 2000, where there were virtually 400000 vegetarians. Later on, statistics indicated a rather steady decline in the 15 consecutive years to come, then levelled off for roughly 3 years. However, the chart showed a dramatic increase from 2015 to 2020. All things considered, the given chart indicates that the overall number of vegetarians in the UK remained constant between 1980 to 2015, but it began to grow significantly afterwards.
The
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chart demonstrates the number of UK adolescents sticking to a vegetarian diet over the past 140 years.

At the beginning of the
first
decade, the graph
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
a moderate growth reaching a total number of approximately 250000 individuals following the diet,
however
, it experienced a slight decrease from 1985 to 1987.

Between 1987 and 1995, the statistics fluctuated,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it
was followed
by an impressive rose in the upcoming years, peaked in 2000, where there were
virtually
400000 vegetarians.

Later on, statistics indicated a
rather
steady decline in the 15 consecutive years to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
, then levelled off for roughly 3 years.
However
, the chart
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
a dramatic increase from 2015 to 2020.

All things considered, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
chart indicates that the
overall
number of vegetarians in the UK remained constant
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1980 and 2015".
between 1980 to 2015
,
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but
it began to grow
significantly
afterwards.
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IELTS academic The given chart demonstrates the number of UK adolescents sticking to a vegetarian diet over the past 140 years.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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