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The table below shows the current packaging recycling rates and the recycling targets of various packaging material for five conservative future years.

The table below shows the current packaging recycling rates and the recycling targets of various packaging material for five conservative future years. 9QOXW
The given table represent the data of five different packing materials that were recycled in recent year and future and year: 2020, 2021, 2022. Overall, the numbers of recycling is significantly increasing each year. To be more specific, during the year 2022 total recycling rates hit the peak point in table, which was 75. 4%. Comparing current rate to the Future rates, paper is 65% recycled in 2019 and then it is rose 5% more in 2022 and then it is to grow 1% in remaining years. Apart from this, Aluminium is rising 8% in 2020 and after this rate of aluminium is growing 3% each year. Steel is the highest recycled material in current year, it is expected to be increase 8% in 2022 and 1% in 2021 and 2022. WOOD is the least popular material in current year, the recycling rates of wood is 21% these year and inclined and hit the benchmark of 31% in 2022.
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table represent the data of five
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packing materials that
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and future and
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: 2020, 2021, 2022.

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, the numbers of recycling is
significantly
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year
. To be more specific, during the
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2022 total recycling
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rates
hit the peak point in table, which was 75. 4%.

Comparing
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current
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to the Future
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, paper is 65% recycled in 2019 and then it is rose 5% more in 2022 and then it is to grow 1% in remaining years. Apart from this,
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Aluminium
is rising 8% in 2020 and after this
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rate
of
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aluminium
is growing 3% each year.

Steel is the highest recycled material in
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, it is
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to be increase 8% in 2022 and 1% in 2021 and 2022. WOOD is the least popular material in
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, the recycling
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of wood is 21% these
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and inclined and hit the benchmark of 31% in 2022.

IELTS academic The table below shows the current packaging recycling rates and the recycling targets of various packaging material for five conservative future years.

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