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The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013

The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013 YDWN
The maps demonstrate the changes in the seaside resort of Templeton, for thirteen-year period, from 2000 to 2013. It can be seen that there were six big changes. Overall, the infrastructure of the resort developed substantially for these years. There were built plenty of buildings. In 2000, the resourt had fascilities like school, hospital, houses and blocks of flats. At one end of it there was a lake and behind it was a cottege, and at the other were trees next to the Railway station. However, the resourt in 2013 was constructed and the trees were cut down. Between the sea and river was constructed a big supermarket and in the other right side ot the river was built factory. In the middle of north side there was airport which was added on to to the school. In contrast, the was built ferry. There were fascilities which were saved for the period. For example, parking and the house oppossite of it and the bridges.
The maps demonstrate the
changes
in the seaside resort of Templeton, for thirteen-year period, from 2000 to 2013.

It can be
seen
that there were six
big
changes
.
Overall
, the infrastructure of the resort developed
substantially
for these years. There
were built
plenty
of buildings.

In 2000, the
resourt
had
fascilities
like school, hospital,
houses
and blocks of flats. At one
end
of it there was a lake and behind it was a
cottege
, and at the other were trees
next
to the Railway station.

However
, the
resourt
in 2013
was constructed
and the trees were
cut
down. Between the sea and river
was constructed
a
big
supermarket and in the other right side
ot
the river
was built
factory. In the middle of north side there was airport which was
added
on
to to
the school.
In contrast
, the
was built
ferry.

There were
fascilities
which
were saved
for the period.
For example
, parking and the
house
oppossite
of it and the bridges.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013

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