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number of phones sold for a period of 6 years

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The table illustrates some big phones companies and the number of cell phones sold by them. Overall, on the top of the sales is Samsung. Also, a visible success during the years has Apple. However, firms like Ericsson and Motorola went down considerable. For a period of six years, Nokia had a fluctuation in its sales. Strating with 2006 this company was at the top of the list. It number of mobile phones sold was increasing during a year, and deacreasing a little during another. In 2008, and 2010 are more successful then 2007 and 2009. Further more, it

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 and the number of cell phones sold by them.

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 was at the top of the list. Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'It'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
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IELTS academic number of phones sold for a period of 6 years

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American English

3 paragraphs

98 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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