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The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates,protein and fat in three different diest

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diest DGoW
The provided pie charts compare data on the prcentage of 3 kinds of units, carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets, namely, an avarage diet, a healthy diet and healthy diet for sport. Overall, it is noticable that sportsmen require a significantly higher proportion of carbonhydrates in a diet than avarage diet or healthy diet while fat becomes the lowest percentage in three categories. To begin with, carbohydrate contains 60 % of the healthy diet for sport. This is 10 % higher than the amount of carbohydrate in normal healthy diet, and 20 percent more than proportion in avarage diet. However, people, who eat avarage diet, consume greater amount of protein 40 percent, compared to 30% of normal healthy diet and 25% of healthy diet for sport. In contrast, avarage diet and healthy diet both diests make up similiar proportion of fat with 20 percent but the figure of fat in sport people's diet accaunts for 15%
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avarage
diet, a
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healthy
diet and
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healthy
diet for
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sport
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noticable
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carbonhydrates
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avarage
diet or
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healthy
diet while
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fat
becomes the lowest percentage in three categories. To
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with, carbohydrate contains 60 % of the
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healthy
diet for
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sport
. This is 10 % higher than the amount of carbohydrate in normal
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healthy
diet, and 20 percent more than proportion in
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avarage
diet.
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,
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avarage
diet, consume greater amount of protein 40 percent, compared to 30% of normal
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healthy
diet and 25% of
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diet for
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sport
.
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avarage
diet and
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diet both
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diests
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sport
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for 15%
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diest

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