Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Overall, it is clear that the amount of Canada and European Community increased over the period given, while for Australia, it dropped.

Overall, it is clear that the amount of Canada and European Community increased over the period given, while for Australia, it dropped. XWlN

Overall, it is clear that the amount of Canada and European Community increased over the period given, while for Australia, it dropped. Interesting, Canada was the most wheat exports country in 1985, but in 1990, European Community exported more than the others. With regards to the amount of wheat exports in Canada, it began at around 19 tonnes and felling slightly to about 17 tonnes in 1986 before peaked at 25 tonnes in 1988, and then this figure decreased sharply and rose rapidly at about 19tonnes in the last year. Likewise, approximately 17tonnes of European Community was exported in the first year, after which the figure fluctuated minimally and reached a high of just over 20tonnes in the final years. On the other hand, Australia exported the lowest number of wheat throughout the entire period. It increasing slightly and declined steadily at approximately 10 tonnes in 1990

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the amount of Canada and European Community increased over the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
, while for Australia, it dropped. Interesting, Canada was the most wheat exports country in 1985, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 1990, European Community exported more than the others.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
With regards to
 the amount of wheat exports in Canada, it began at around 19 tonnes and felling slightly
 to about 17 tonnes in 1986 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 peaked at 25 tonnes in 1988, and then this figure decreased sharply
 and rose rapidly
 at about 19tonnes in the last year. Likewise
, approximately 17tonnes of European Community was exported
 in the first
 year, after which the figure fluctuated minimally
 and reached a high of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 over 20tonnes in the final years.

On the other hand
, Australia exported the lowest number of wheat throughout the entire period. Did you mean "It's increasing", "It is increasing", or "It was increasing"?It's increasingIt is increasingIt was increasing
It increasing
slightly
 and declined steadily
 at approximately 10 tonnes in 1990

IELTS academic Overall, it is clear that the amount of Canada and European Community increased over the period given, while for Australia, it dropped.

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

146 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
?
One main idea per paragraph
?
Include an introduction and conclusion
?
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
?
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
?
Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
?
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Labels Descriptions

?
Currently is not available
Meet the criteria
Doesn't meet the criteria