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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. qobE
The given chart depicts us the information about the men and women who have passed their driving test taken between 1980 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that despite there is an increase in the number of women passed their driving test in first 3 decades, there was a downfall in the last decade. Whereas there is consistent rise in the number of men passing their driving tests in first 3 decades had the same number in the fourth decade as in the third. In 1980, the women who have taken their driving tests and passed was around 48%. In the 2 next decades there a rise in the number to almost 68%. By the end of 2010, there was slight decrease in number to nearly 64%. Similarly in the same year 1980, men who took driving tests and passed was accounted to 28% only but in the next two decades there was a significant rise resulting to almost 49% but in 2010 the number of men remained the same as in 2000.
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of women
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passing their
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in
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in the fourth decade as in the third.

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and
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was around 48%. In the 2
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to almost 68%.

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of 2010, there was slight decrease in
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who took
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in 2010 the
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remained the same as in 2000.

IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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