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The table below gives information about the percentages of adults who paid for admission to various entertaining events in five nations in 2021

The table below gives information about the percentages of adults who paid for admission to various entertaining events in five nations in 2021 0p55l

The table provided shows information regarding the percentage of adult people who paid for entering different entertaining events in the United State of America, Canada, France, Germany and United Kingdome in 2012. Overall, USA and Canada were the most countries their adult population visited the Cinema and the least that went to Museums Galleries. The adult people of France and Germany on the other hand they have visited Performing Arts, Cinema and Museums Galleries almost the same rate. However, the sports were on the bottom of the list of visiting. Finally, UK adult people were attending all four of these events relatively the same. Firstly, United State of America and Canada adult population they have visited the Cinema with the highest percentages among all the countries with 59. 7% and 52. 6% respectively. While the Museums Galleries were the least interest them with lowest paid rate with 20. 6% and 15. 6% respectively. While France and Germany population had almost the same rate of paying for these events, which are Performing Arts, Cinema and Museums Galleries, they had the least interest to attended Sports with 22. 7% for France people. and 26. 9% for Germany people. Finally, United Kingdome population had a relatively similar taste of these entertaining events attending.

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