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The table and the chart give us information regarding the population of Japan with the age of 65 during the years 1950 to 2055.

The table and the chart give us information regarding the population of Japan with the age of 65 during the years 1950 to 2055. KlkQM
The table and the chart give us information regarding the population of Japan with the age of 65 during the years 1950 to 2055. According to the information provided by the graph and the table, the population of Japanese aged 65 in 1950 was lower than in 2005. The number of people aged 65, in 1950, was 4. 1 million out of a total population of 84. 1 million, it is 4. 9% of the total population. In 2005 this percentage increased considerably to 20. 0%, speaking in millions it is a total of 25. 7 million out of a total of 127. 8 million. However, although the population has increased over the years, it is expected that the population of Japanese under the age of 65 will decrease considerably, and as a consequence of this decrease, the 65-year-old population will increase to 41. 0% (36. 5 million). These statistics show a decrease in the Japanese population and an increase in elderly persons.
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of Japan with the age of 65 during the years 1950 to 2055.

According to the information provided by the graph and the table, the
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population
of Japanese aged 65 in 1950 was lower than in 2005. The number of
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people
aged 65, in 1950, was 4. 1
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out of a
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population
of 84. 1
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, it is 4. 9% of the
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total
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. In 2005 this percentage increased
considerably
to 20. 0%, speaking in
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it is a
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of 25. 7
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out of a
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total
of 127. 8 million.

However
, although the
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has increased over the years, it is
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expected
that the
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of Japanese under the age of 65 will decrease
considerably
, and as a consequence of this decrease, the 65-year-
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old
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will increase to 41. 0% (36. 5 million).

These statistics
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a decrease in the Japanese
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and an increase in elderly persons.
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IELTS academic The table and the chart give us information regarding the population of Japan with the age of 65 during the years 1950 to 2055.

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