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The table and pie chart reveals statistics on the proportion of local and international research students in Australian colleges between 2001 and 2010.

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The table and pie chart reveals statistics on the proportion of local and international research students in Australian colleges between 2001 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that the number of local research students remained higher than international research students over the period. In addition, with time the development of both local and international students increased in universities As shown in the table, the highest number of local research students was recorded in 2001, accounting for 33, 657. These figures increased significantly to reach the peak of 39, 488 in 2010. In contrast, just only 5, 192 was recorded in international research students in 2001, compared with the figure of local students was less much more. However, in 2010, there was a dramatic increase in international research students, measuring at 14, 593 accordingly. Overall by 2010, 15, 232 research students took admission in colleges. The given pie charts provide an estimate of local students and international research students. Particularly, the ratio of local students was 87 percent, compared with the international students with just only 13 percent in 2001. Whereas, this figure changed by 2010 as the strength of international students rose to 20 percent, while there was a decline for local students, with 73 percent of total statistics. Moreover, the pie charts are further separated into male and female categories and show information of local and international research students based on gender. The percentage of international research students increased from 9 percent male and 4 percent female to 12 percent male and 15 percent female respectively.
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in Australian colleges between 2001 and 2010.

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remained higher than
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over the period.
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increased in
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was recorded
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in 2001, compared with the figure of
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took admission in colleges.

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was 87
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13
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rose to 20
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, while there was a decline for
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, with 73
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based on gender. The percentage of
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increased from 9
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