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The table and graph below give information about the amount of money spent on political campaigns in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This table shows the money spent on political campaigns in AUS$ billions of four different Australian states from 1999 to 2002, whereas the bar chart shows the amount of spending in AUS$ billions in the whole country for the same time period. Table trend: An increase in spending over the years in all four states from 1999 to 2002. New South Wales spent the most money from in the past four years, with a rapid budget increase between 2000 and 2002. In 1999 New South Wales spent a significant amount of AUS$ 18 billion on their political campaign. In 2000 New South Wales, Victoria, and Queensland had a budget increase of AUS$1 billion. In 2000 and 2001 there was a significant rise in campaign spending in New South Wales with the amount of AUS$ 6 billion in those consecutive years. Victoria spent the second largest amount of their political campaign with the amount of AUS$ 16 billion spent in 1999, AUS$ 17 billion in 2000, jumping to AUS$ 19 billion in 2001, and AUS$ 21 billion in 2002; just AUS$ 6 billion less than New South Wales. Tasmania showed the least amount spent with a consistent spent of AUS$ 5 billion for two consecutive years between 1999 and 2000. Both Queensland and Tasmania increased their budget with only AUS$ 1 billion between 2000 and 2001, and 2001 and 2002 consecutively. In the bar chart we notice a steady increase in spending between 1999 and 2000 with a dramatic increase from 2000 to 2001 and a slight increase between 2001 to 2002. Between 1999 and 2002 Australia had a significant increase in their campaign spending from about AUS$ 58 billion spent in 1999 to just below AUS$ 90 billion spent in 2002. In both figures we notice large increases in the amount spent on political campaigns between 1999 and 2002. Australia as a country invested AUS$ 88 billion on political campaigns in 2002.
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In both figures we notice large
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