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a chart and table about changes in a year

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The chart compares a country’s exports' annual prices in separate categories in 2015 and 2016. The table illustrates the changes in 2016 to 2015 in proportions. Overall, what stands out from the given chart is in four out of five categories the 2016 values were higher than last year’s. Thus in the table below the figure was in the gems and jewelry category. Furthermore, the textiles category had a significantly big growth followed by engineered goods. In contrast, the growth percentage for agricultural products was dramatically low, followed by petroleum products. In terms of categories that had a change higher than 5% gems and jewelry was the only one with a decrease in 2016 with 5. 18%. The textiles sector had the highest increase rate in the table with 15. 24% while the number for engineered goods was 8. 5%. Looking at the least changes categories, agricultural products’ value only rises 0. 81% in 2016 compared with 2015. On the other hand, petroleum products sector’s price was not as identical as last year with getting 3% bigger.
The chart compares a country’s exports' annual prices in separate
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categories
in 2015 and 2016. The table illustrates the
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in 2016 to 2015 in proportions.

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, what stands out from the
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chart is in four out of five
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the 2016 values were higher than last year’s.
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Thus
in the table below the figure was in the gems and jewelry
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.
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textiles
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had a
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growth followed by engineered
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low, followed by petroleum products.

In terms of
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that had a
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higher than 5% gems and jewelry was the
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one with a decrease in 2016 with 5. 18%. The textiles sector had the highest increase rate in the table with 15. 24% while the number for engineered
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goods
was 8. 5%.

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changes
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, agricultural products’ value
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rises 0. 81% in 2016 compared with 2015.
On the other hand
, petroleum products sector’s price was not as identical as last year with getting 3% bigger.
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