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The table above compares percentages of mobile phone owners in terms of using its features

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The table above compares percentages of mobile phone owners in terms of using its features. In general, make calls was the main purpose for people to use mobile phone from 2006 to 2010. The other functions were growth steadily after years. As can be seen in the table, all of mobile phone owners use them for making calls, while next most popular used function is sending and receiving text message, at 73%. In contrary, the purposes for entertainment such as play games or music are quite low, only 17% and 12% respectively for each function. Whereas, searching the internet and recording video didn't have a specific figures. Additionally, after 4 years, making calls still dominated the first place but was suffered a slight decrease of 1%. Using mobile phone for surfing the internet had a considerable rise with a 32 percentage increase. A similar pattern could be seen in recording video, a rise from only 9% to 35%. Whereas, mobile functions such as taking photo, sending & receiving text messages, playing music suffered a mildly growth, at 76%, 79% and 26% respectively.

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