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The supplied chart illustrates the cycle process collection of rain’s waters by which is collected in order to use it as drinking water in an Australian city.

The supplied chart illustrates the cycle process collection of rain’s waters by which is collected in order to use it as drinking water in an Australian city. XyLj8
The supplied chart illustrates the cycle process collection of rain’s waters by which is collected in order to use it as drinking water in an Australian city. Overall, all houses have been built in same shape with a gable roof to stack up water efficient. All waters are leaded by a main pipe to go through a double steps man-made trend to enable individuals drink this water. The first step of water refinery begins with a water filter which omit water by its filter and it continued by being saved in a huge reservoir. The second step with flowing water is about to carry on which is transformed to water treatment to eradicate possible pathogens. In addition, by a supplement process will be ended in a chemical trend and directly flows to houses. Mohammad Mahdi [Mani] Nezami Academic Module
The supplied chart illustrates the cycle process collection of rain’s
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waters
by which
is collected
in order to
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use
it as drinking
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water
in an Australian city.

Overall
, all
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houses
have
been built
in same shape with a gable roof to stack up
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water
efficient. All
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waters
are leaded
by a main pipe to go through a double steps
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man
-made trend to enable individuals drink this water.

The
first
step of
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water
refinery
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begins
with a
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water
filter which omit
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water
by its filter and it continued by
being saved
in a huge reservoir.

The second step with flowing
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water
is about to carry on which
is transformed
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
treatment to eradicate possible pathogens.
In addition
, by a supplement process will
be ended
in a chemical trend and
directly
flows to
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houses
.

Mohammad Mahdi [Mani]
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IELTS academic The supplied chart illustrates the cycle process collection of rain’s waters by which is collected in order to use it as drinking water in an Australian city.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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