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Map comparison about an area development

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These 3 maps illustrate some respective developments from 1962 until now. Overall, although the meadows village and the Fonton secion has approximately in the same place as past, they experienced significant extension. Firstly, 3 new sections have been added to the meadows village by the year 1985, the housing estate, leisure complex and the superstore. The housing state and the leisure complex are in the north of the village right above the first road wich have extended from 1962 to 1985. Also a new road have been connected the former main areas in the 1985 which still can be seen. From 1985 till now, the housing state have become bigger while other spots are as large as the past, so it makes the housing state the largest part of the meadows suburbs. Hotel, station and business park have been added as well. They are right between the very first 2 areas, next to the road. Another new highlighted feature is the train rail which took placed in east of the map, starts from the corner of Fonton and continues to the station.
These 3 maps illustrate
some
respective developments from 1962 until
now
.

Overall
, although the meadows village and the
Fonton
secion
has approximately in the same place as past, they experienced significant extension.

Firstly
, 3 new sections have been
added
to the meadows village by the year 1985, the housing estate, leisure complex and the superstore. The housing state and the leisure complex are in the north of the village right above the
first
road
wich
have extended from 1962 to 1985.
Also
a new road have
been connected
the former main areas in the 1985 which
still
can be
seen
.

From 1985 till
now
, the housing state have become bigger while other spots are as large as the past,
so
it
makes
the housing state the largest part of the meadows suburbs. Hotel, station and business park have been
added
as well
. They are right between the
very
first
2 areas,
next
to the road. Another new highlighted feature is the train rail which took placed in east of the map,
starts
from the corner of
Fonton
and continues to the station.
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4 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
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