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The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.

The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant. e5X0p
The maps present the changes that occurred in the town of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010. Overall, Stokeford increased significantly in size over the period with house replacing areas that used to be farmland. Stokeford is situated on the east side of the River Stoke. In 1930, there was one main road going through the town from north to south. Along each side of the road were some houses, some shops, a post office, and primary school. By 2010, the post office still remained, but the shops had been replaced by more houses. There were also new roads built to connect the new houses to the main road. Moreover, the primary school had been enlarged and even more houses had been built to the west of the town in an area that was farmland in 1930. To the southeast of the town, there were some public gardens with a large house, but this was converted into a retirement home sometime over the period. Finally, the farmland that had been to the south of the town was also converted into a new housing area.
The maps present the
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Stokeford
between 1930 and 2010.

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Stokeford
increased
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in size over the period with
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house
replacing areas that
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used
to be farmland.

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Stokeford
is situated
on the east side of the River Stoke. In 1930, there was one main
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road
going through the
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town
from north to south. Along each side of the
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road
were
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some
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houses
,
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some
shops, a post office, and primary school. By 2010, the post office
still
remained,
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but
the shops had
been replaced
by more
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houses
. There were
also
new
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roads
built to connect the new
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houses
to the main
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road
.
Moreover
, the primary school had
been enlarged
and even more
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houses
had
been built
to the west of the
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town
in an area that was farmland in 1930.

To the southeast of the
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town
, there were
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some
public gardens with a large
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house
,
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but
this
was converted
into a retirement home sometime over the period.
Finally
, the farmland that had been to the south of the
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town
was
also
converted into a new housing area.

IELTS academic The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.

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