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describe an ideal house or apartment you would like to live in the future

describe an ideal house or apartment you would like to live in the future 1bn1q

If I had to talk about my ideal house, it would be a palatial and magnificent villa by the seaside in a peaceful country setting. I love the idea of having a three-storey villa because when I was a child, I aspired to be a queen living in a mighty and vast kingdom of my own. It would have to be painted White as snow, which is my favourite colour. Outside will be planted a lot of flowers with all colors and scents: roses, lilies, violets I love natural lights rather than artificial lights so each room would have its own windows and balcony would be sealed. Although large, the house will be filled with warmth and happiness. Each bedroom would have a balcony where we can enjoy the breathtaking view of the sea. At night, the whole family will watch the starry sky together with the rustling of the waves. The perfect location would be by the sea because I love the idea of sitting on the beach and watching the sunrise and the sunset every day. Another reason is that the weather in coastal areas is usually nice―not too hot and not too cold. It’s pleasant almost all year round. I love that villa and I want to live there forever. Just imagining that place makes my heart flutter again, imagining the scene where the whole family gathers briefly, watching the sunrise and listening to the sound of the wind, the waves crashing on the shore, forgetting all the sadness, trouble and the hustle and bustle of city life. How peaceful and at ease it is

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